Katherine Mansfield died from tuberculosis at the age of 34, a year after the publication of this collection of short stories.
There is something quite captivating about her writing, although it took me a little while to realise it. The first few pages didn't seem too promising. The first story is At the Bay, and it begins with a long descriptive passage of a coastal scene in New Zealand. The writing is beautiful, almost poetic, and her observations are minute and detailed. It is clear she is attempting to evoke a sense of the landscape as it would be experienced by all the senses, to convey not only how it looks, but how it sounds, and what it would feel like to be there. And yet I found it a little tedious; I could see the skill in her writing but I couldn't find any interest in her subject, and I disliked the frequent use of onomatopoeic words.
But then she turns her focus onto people, conveying them with this same keenness of observation, and in consequence achieves something remarkable. She takes as her subject conventional domestic life, the ordinary everyday moments, and she subjects them to an unusually intense scrutiny. In doing so she highlights aspects of shared experience that are usually not remarked upon, things so commonly experienced that they are never really noticed. And it is done so compactly, that sometimes a single line or thought will reveal the character of the subject.
The first is Stanley Burnell. We follow his thoughts during an early morning swim in the New Zealand bay, and his frustration when he is forced to share the ocean with his brother-in-law Jonathon Trout. Stanley's focus is completely on himself; he expresses an impatience about everything not moulded to conform to his wishes: the way he looks at life it seems evident that his problem should be everyone's problem, his desire everyone's priority. And as he leaves for work his self-centredness is summarised so effectively in his departing thought: 'No time to say goodbye!' he cried. And he meant that as a punishment to her. And then the moment he is gone - the relief that settles on the household, a collective expiration, the delicious sense of a day made perfect by someone's temporary absence. Who doesn't know that feeling?
A portrayal of the unreflectively selfish individual imposing themself, and through their personality oppressing the lives of those around them, is an element common to many of the stories, whether it is the pampered teenager in The Young Girl, the dead father in The Daughters of the Late Colonel, or the appalling wife in Marriage à la Mode. Other stories are written from the viewpoint of the oppressed: as reflections on the past as in Life of Ma Parker and as a monologue in The Lady's Maid. These stories quietly emphasise the tragedy of working-class life. The collection of stories comes across as a critique of the bourgeoisie.
But it was the first and longest story, At the Bay, which I enjoyed the most, with its unusual meandering through the consciousnesses of each of the characters, and its revealing snapshots of family life. There was only one moment in which I felt she had it wrong, one character in whom I couldn't believe. It was Linda, the wife of Stanley Burnell, who when left alone with her baby son, quietly reveals her secret: she doesn't love her children. Surely this could only have been written by someone who wasn't herself a mother? The keenest of observations can only ever reveal part of the truth; some things can only be understood through experiencing them.
I thought her short stories excellent, I read that very edition that you picture on the right (the grey one). Funnily enough I saw this novel (not either of these editions!) in a bookshop today and nearly bought it for my 15 year old daughter who had sent me to buy her some books. Maybe I should have done....I was not sure if she'd go for the short story format.
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ReplyDeleteI read the grey one as well. I was taken with the cover illustration, and the old orange ones have a tendency to disintegrate as you read them. It's difficult to know if a 15 year old would appreciate these stories, they are slightly caustic and yet they are realistic; as soon as you read them you realize how well she has observed certain personality types and how cleverly she has evoked them. I wonder if someone younger and less experienced would perceive the book the same way?
There are mothers who don't love their children, you can find them in the news here and there. Albeit it's the weirdest of things us humans can do, it is understandable due to extremely harsh circumstances which can occur around parenthood.
ReplyDeleteHi, really, really late comment I know (I have just found your blog and am reading all the entries, making notes on things to look out for, and to head to Skoob Books very shortly) but I remember reading 'At the Bay' and feeling strongly at the time that the mother has made a mistake about her own feelings. She instinctively smiles back at the little boy (until she makes a conscious effort to stop herself) and almost cries at his confidence that she loves him. If she really didn't care she wouldn't give it a second thought, and certainly wouldn't be startled into tears. Also her feeling that she 'could never have nursed or played with the little girls' sounded to me like guilt.
ReplyDeleteI also wanted to say that next time you're in the UK, I've found Copperfields in Wimbledon is quite good for penguins and I have 'The Unseemly Adventure' by Ralph Straus and 'a travelling woman' by John Wain (both obtained from Copperfield's) if you'd like them (I was going to put them on Bookmooch, but as you are specifically collecting penguins it did seem to make sense to offer to send them your way) the first is a little foxed, but absolutely readable.
Hi, really, really late comment I know (I have just found your blog and am reading all the entries, making notes on things to look out for, and to head to Skoob Books very shortly) but I remember reading 'At the Bay' and feeling strongly at the time that the mother has made a mistake about her own feelings. She instinctively smiles back at the little boy (until she makes a conscious effort to stop herself) and almost cries at his confidence that she loves him. If she really didn't care she wouldn't give it a second thought, and certainly wouldn't be startled into tears.
ReplyDeleteI also wanted to say that next time you're in the UK, I've found Copperfields in Wimbledon is quite good for penguins and I have 'The Unseemly Adventure' by Ralph Straus (obtained from Copperfields) if you'd like it (I was going to put it on Bookmooch, but as you are specifically collecting penguins it did seem to make sense to offer to send it your way) it's a little foxed, but absolutely readable.